Personal Statements Each application service has room for a personal statement, and each has its own instructions.  The following are excerpts from the application instructions for each application service: AMCAS - “This is your opportunity to provide personal information that is otherwise not included on the application. Consider and construct your comments carefully; many admissions committees place significant weight on this section.” AACOMAS - “We encourage you to provide your motivation for applying to the field of osteopathic medicine in this section.” AADSAS - “Your Applicant Essay provides an opportunity to explain why you desire to pursue a dental education.” VMCAS - “Your personal statement should help the admission committee(s) learn something about you as a person, about the development of your interest in veterinary medicine, and about your career goals.” AACPMAS – “State below why you are interested in becoming a Doctor of Podiatric Medicine. Provide any additional significant information to your application, e. g., experience in a health care delivery setting” This is your opportunity to expound upon experiences that you have had that did not go anywhere else on the application, or which you did not get a chance to describe in enough detail.  You volunteered a lot of hours, but what kind of experiences did you gain from it?  How did your experiences motivate you even further to pursue this career?  What unique qualities/experiences do you/have you had that you would like the committee to know about?  The following suggestions will be helpful: Proofread the essay before and after copying and pasting to your application!  Copying and pasting from Word or other word processing programs can sometimes cause formatting errors, check your statement carefully before submitting it. Quality is more important than quantity. Make sure the essay is legible.  Do not squeeze the lines together to make a long essay fit – please shorten the essay. Have others read your essay.  Ask them to comment not only on grammatical errors, but also on what kind of person the essay makes you sound like.  Do you sound sincere? If explaining anything negative on your application (such as a bad semester, conduct probation, etc.), be open and honest.  Mention the facts and move on.  Explain your side of the story, but do not make excuses. Creativity and quality are important, but you are not expected to write a masterpiece.  It should be apparent that you can express yourself well, but do not try to “woo” the admissions committee with big words and elaborate descriptions.  You should sound like a real person! Try to stick with why you are interested in medicine, what you have done in the field, etc.  Do not try to use this as an essay to review the medical field, its’ strengths, weaknesses, current trends, etc.  This essay is so they learn about you, not the field of medicine. If you are reapplying, write a new personal statement.  Show that you are willing to put some effort into your new application. Tips for Writing Your Health Profession Personal Statement  (. pdf format ) Personal Statement Links Winning Personal Statements Personal Statement Evaluation Services Students may have their personal statements evaluated by a pre-health professions advisor at the Office of Health and Legal Professions Advising. Please follow the instructions below if you wish to have your essay evaluated. Your essay must be typed, and double spaced. Provide your name, UF ID #, and e-mail address on the upper right hand corner of the essay. Drop off your essay with the OHLPA assistant, Academic Advising Center, second floor room 204. Your essay will be reviewed within 5-7 days. You will be notified via e-mail when your essay has been reviewed. Once you have been notified that your essay has been evaluated, you may either schedule an appointment to discuss your essay with the pre-health advisor who read your essay or you may stop by OHLPA and pick up your essay with an attached document listing suggestions and comments. Your essay will not be evaluated more than once.  If you desire to have subsequent revisions reviewed, please consider personal statement evaluation services at the Career Resource Center.